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Zoe's advertisement
Purpose: Chocolate sale
Target audience: kids
Why is it effective: because everything in the ad is made of chocolate

Ask any questions vs you can lie

I would choose ask any questions than you can lie.

The reason is pretty simple, because I hate lying.

And if you can ask any questions and get the honest answer, why do I need to lie?

I can't really find reason to lie.

Therefore, I'm going to choose ask any questions because I think it's much better.

Jonas Journal Entry

I was just sitting, waiting patiently for my turn to get called.

I was excited, getting a little proud of myself for that moment waiting.

But she skipped my turn!

How embarrassed, and depressed I felt!

What did I do wrong?

Clio Awards Advertisement

Target Audience: woman before wedding

Reason why Clio awards chose this: I think clio chose this ad because it is a clever ad that is showing when to use the product clearly.

Elements

1.Camera angle-its taking it from little far away.
2.Body language- the man’s pose shows that he is bit panicking and trying to help his fiancé. The woman’s pose is also showing that she is asking for help.

3.Lighting and color- this ad has many light pink and lighting　makes the back ground blurry.

4. Symbolism- there are not really any of this

5. Special effect-they took the photo with the way that shows the dolls on the cake clearly

6. Beauty and social standing- the cake is beatifuly decorated but the point the woman fall in the cake is socially standing

7.Layout and graphics- the layout of this ad is beautiful with roses and the light pink matching good and the graphic is funny with a woman falling in a beautiful wedding cake

Advertisement
Target audience: elderly woman
Kimono

• comfortable
• not hot to wear
• good looking fashion
• discounted price

Don't you want to wear new comfortable summer clothes?
This kimono is a beautiful purple colour with graceful butterflies on and we made it very light to make it comfortable to wear.
We also made a nice holes to make you not disgusted by the summer hot temperature.
This is now on discount of 30% so, come and buy this to beat the hot summer temperature!

The GIVER summary (so far)

Aircrafts overflown Jonas' community, frightened. Asher, distracted by salmons, getting late.
Jonas and his parents have private talk at dinner.

Psych

Crime: murder and the accidental murder

Detective: Spencer and Burton

Villain: the father

Victim: villain's son and the witess of the villain's son accidently killed

Witness: the guy who came into the cabinet

Sence: Spencer stole a bag from a guy and the guy chased Spencer with a knife

Red herring: kidnap was madeup

Clue: magcap rolling on the floor, pot on the hot plate

Surprise ending: that the father actually killed his own son

Psych

Psych___Shawn Spencer who is gifted child for remembering all the details around him with his spectacular observation skill.

And his first case was about a kidnap of a teenager.

The truth was, teenager was not kidnapped. He made it up hisself to get a ransom money from his father. The father got tricked and brought his ransom money in where he was asked to do.

And on the way home, he saw a car he is familiar with. He chased the car and arrived to a cabinet, and there was his son safe, making coffee. The dad got really mad and attacked him to teach a lesson___he didn't mean to kill him, but he accidentally hit his son's head at the edge of the table so hard and___ killed him. And when he accidentally killed his son, another person came in who had witnessed the dad killing his son accidentally,　the dad held a gun and shot him to hide the truth. But the Spencer came for a survey with his partner, Burton found a mag cap rolling on the floor, and a pot on the hot plate. From those details, he revealed that someone was makig a coffee in this cabin and something had happen...! He revealed all of the truth hidden by the father and finally arrested the murder.

Sammy Keyes and the hotel thief

Sammy (real name Samantha) is a middle schooler who has an ability to solve cases and this time, she had came across a case of a hotel thief.
One day, Sammy was looking through her grand mother 's vinocular, she saw a guy with black gloves on and stealing money through a purse in the Heavenly hotel.
Threatening letter on Double dynamo(ice cream store) napkins, suspects on Sammy by a police officer, chase, trap___ so many mystery elements inside the Sammy's adventure! Who is the hotel thief?

witnesses- somebody who looked at the crime

Detective- detective is a person to solve a case or problem in the mystery stories

Crime- crime is a case happening in mystery stories

Villains-villain is a person commited the crime in the mystery stories

Victim- victim is a target of the villains in mystery stories

Senses- the atmosphere of, theill, danger, and etc

6 mysteries

A Study in Scarlet

Detective: Sherlock Holmes

Crime:murder

Villain:Hope Jefferson

Victims: Inock J Drebper, Joseph Stanganson

Clues: Foot prints

Suspect: Joseph Stangason

Murder on the Orient Express

Detective: Hercule Poirot

Victim: Ratchet

Suspects: Hector Willard MacQueen, Edward Henry Masterman, Pierre Michel, Mary Hermione Debenham,Colonel Arbuthnot, .
Princess Natalia Dragomiroff,
Hildegarde Schmidt, Countess Helena/Elena Andrenyi,
Greta Ohlsson, Mrs. Caroline Martha Hubbard,Antonio Foscarelli, Cyrus Bethman Hardman,
Villains: All of the suspects

Red herring: Every suspects had alibis

Surprise Ending: All of the suspects commited murder

Sammy keyes and the Hotel thief

Detective: Samantha

Crime: theft

Clues: double dynamo napkins

Villain: Osacar(Daniel)

Victim: Guina

Witness: Samantha through her vinovulars

Morgu Street Mysterious case

Detective: Augusts Dupan

Crime: murder

Villain: Orangutan

Clues: article about apes

Evidence: hair
Surprise Ending: The villain was a big Orang utan

Nate the Great

Detective: Nate

Problem: house keys dissapear

who did this: Rothamond

Clues: paper with discription about the spot with keys

Process: looking inside the drawer with full of forks and spoons

Surprise Ending: the house keys were on dog's collar

Detective Conan Murder on Roller Coaster

Detective: Conan(Kudou Shinichi)

Villain: Hitomi

Victim: Kishida

Crime: murder

Suspect: Aiko

Evidence: necklace

Monk

The mystery case we watched was about murder caused by a criminal investigator name Angeline. Because she belongs to police so when the accident death happened__ such as an old lady died because of a baseball hit on her head, and a man died because lightening hit him___she bought voodoo dalls and sneaked in to there house with a dall in the box that has a delivery stamp with dates before the accident death happened and place it somewhere in the house to make it look like it was delivered before the accident and those people who were accidently dead were actually killed.
She did all of these steps but her real target was actually her uncle who has much much money.
She just used those voobee dalls trick to make it look that her uncle was killed by somebody else.
But she had a problem. The problem was that famous detective Mr.Monk is having inquiry for this case and she was worried about him knowing who is the criminal and solve the case.
So she bought another voodoo dalls of Natalie who is a secretary(or assistant) of Mr.Monk to kill her and make Mr.Monk distracted and confused(red herring).
And at the ending she tries to kill Natalie and put suspects on the voodoo store owner(because all of those voodoo dalls are from his store) but before she happens to kill her, Mr.Monk had revealed all of the truth and rescued Natalie from the criminal, and Angeline had been arrested.

Plastiki

Plastiki is the ship made of plastics which is heaing for Sidney.

This ship is for reusing the plastic bottles thrown away by Americans.

On the website, plastiki.com, it tells that plastiki had traveled 76 nautical miles today and in total of 843 it had traveled in 11days.

And what's more, the lenght of the plastic bottles are now 481536 and also there are 0.0080% of all plastic bottles throen away by Americans today!

Also, roughly 50% of all plastic products end up in the ocean.

vocab 10

admission



blatant

indignantly

Vocab7

1.mildew-that smells bad because a tiny fungus that forms a bad condition for cloths
e.g.OMG! my coat has mildews on because of yesterday's heavy rain

2.out of the blue-When the unexpected thing happens
e.g. my computer shuted down out of the blue

3.hesitantly-don't do something immediately because you are nervous or not certain
e.g. she hesitantly started her math homework

4.hatch-an egg get cracked because of baby creature in it getting born
e.g. the little egg of salmon hatched and a little baby came out

5.orientation-being prepared for a new activity
e.g. we have 6th a orientation about the house project tomorrow

6.chateau-a beautiful big house
e.g. the wealthy person is living in a chateau

7.thunderous-extraordinary loud, big, noisy
e.g.she started to cry thunderous in middle of the class

8.contradiction-argue with someone about something that you disagree
e.g. they both disagreed to each statements and had a contradiction

9.faults-responsibility of something bad or a fail and the part of the earth phenomenon is also called fault e.g. they kept on arguing whether it is her fault or his fault e.g.2 the earthquake happened because of the transforming faults

10.preserve-to manage things properly. keep it the same as the original
e.g. you spoiled it because you didn't preserve it properly

What I know about Haiti

1. Haiti is located in Carribian, close to cuba and there are banch of rich people occupying half of the countries' wealth.
2. Haiti is the poorest country in the western hemisphere and 4th poorest in the whole world.
3. The life expectancy of Haitians are 52 for men and 48 for women, only 30 percent of adults in Haiti are employeed and this is very low in the history.
4. Haiti used to be a richest colony in the western hemisphere.
5. Before the arrival of Colombus and Europeans, Haiti was a thriving civilization country.
6. Europeans brought desease, death, and misery. Since then, there were many dictators in Haiti .
7. Dictators didn't intend to help Haitians at all, instead of that, they have ruled over the Haitians. They persecuate people of Haiti.
8. The dictators stole money from Haiti and left Haitians very poor.
9. Ooutside force stopped Haiti from advancing or from improving.
10. The French and American are holding a grudge the island for their loss and will not help Haiti.

Haiti Updates

• Many countries in the world are trying to donate Haiti


• Not enough aids are held in Haiti, many people passed away


• UNICEF from countries came over to Haiti for the emergency aids, protecting weak little children from another desaster such as infection deseases


• Volunteers are keeping to send supports to help people


• Haiti's conditions are gradually but really slowly, getting better

Haiti Earthquake

Because of the magnitude 7.0 earthquake, the beautiful parace got destroyed.

Many houses that are constructed poorly got simply swept away by the big land slide.

Woman got rescued from the bottom of building

Woman starving and stunned

Unfortunately, thousands of people died in this desaster

My Family and The Airport Troubles

During this winter vacation, my family went back to Japan for 2 weeks and met with my friends and spend great time with my kind grand parents.
My family, mother, father, grandmothers, and grand fathers are occasionally strict but most of the time, they all be really kind and always watching over me with their gentle eyes.
What I knew recently is that they get really mad at me when I did something bad thing but it is because they are all worrying about me. They may look so scary when they are mad but inside, they are really gentle and really really tender.
Sometimes I hear the story about poor children who doesn't have family or their parents are really evil not taking care of their own kids and whenever I hear those sad stories, I once more, feel a big gratitude of having such a great great great times billion times great family.
And I had really good time with them in Japan but still, I have to go back to Jakarta.
So on Friday 8th of January, my dad already went back before us so I and my mom thanked my grandparents and left their house to airport to go back to Jakarta, BUT we had a trouble. It happened at the station. On our plan for going to Narita Japan airport, we ride 2 trains to Nippori station and ride Narita express (the fastest train to get to the airport). And same as the plan, we smoothly got to the Nippori station and bought tickets for the Narita express. BUT, we met with an unexpected happening.
After my mom bought me the ticket, I followed her to the station to ride Narita express, mom went to the wrong station! The station employee told us that the correct station is on the 3rd floor! So we ran to the 3rd floor but OMG not again! We were on the right floor but were on the wrong side of the station! In the scene of we getting confused, the Narita express came but the door didn't open because we were not on the correct side of the station! And 1second later, I found myself really fast. I don't know why, but my body was autimatically running like a lion! As I took a glance on the back, my mom was frantically chasing me over with a suit case in her hands. But, oh boy, I ran too much and I crossed over the stairs to go down and get to the other side of station! Also my mom carelessly crossed over it too. In that moment, at last, the Narita express left the station.
........... I and my mom watched each other's face in dumb. It was so embarrassing! Ahh! But at least, we could ride second fastest train to get to Narita airport, I guess we should think this in good way.
Finally, about 1 hour after, we arrived to the airport and after about 6hours traveling, we finally got to Jakarta. When I came out from the airport, my father was waiting for us!
The temperature was 26 degrees, I was really tired...

Holiday Writing No.10

Finally, I got to the last tenth post of this winter holiday writing.
I finally got here on the last day of vacation!
As you know, I am not good at English writing even though I am a Jakarta International School student. But I'm trying to improve my writing skills by writing these 10 blog posts and I want you to consider myself putting efforts on these.
And my goals for this year 2010 are...

• Improve my English skills
• Put every efforts on doing good things for myself and other people
• Enjoy and always try my best on good things everyday
• Make more friends
• Be friendly to everyone

Hopefully, can attain all of these in this year!!!!!!!!!!